The light, the knight.....the poor sight...!!!!

A lone light
on a lonely night
which
cast a shadow
of the dark knight
who
roaming on the road
had a deep insight
about
what was wrong
and what was right
and
he thought of war
he thought of fights
that
he fought in his heart
to such a height
which
raised many a question
about his plight
when
he gave it up
for fate to decide
how
he should live
and he should die
for
his head was clouded
with duties and rights
of
which he never spoke
which claimed his life
as
he was a coward
and was doomed to die
since
he was a mortal
and he'd defied
the
rules of love
his beloved recites
them
rules that govern
the turn of tides
those
tides that, following,
every knight has died
hence
he decides to end his life
on the turn of the road with the lonely light
for
he'd let down his beloved
and her pride........

9 comments:

Karan said...

hmmm.. nice choice of words those are too rhyming..

Purva said...

i think it's too much rhyming because of which the message of the poem is getting lost somewhere. otherwise nice blogspace

Happy living

dranz3r said...

Yeah, i knw....this wasnt as good as some of the earlier ones....

and Thanks...!!!!

Anonymous said...

good but too rhyming!!

dranz3r said...

that was the point of this one...rhyming...!! :D

zo said...

beautiful rhyming :)really !

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dranz3r said...

ummmm......what do u mean by that??...cuz i actually don't know what u are talking about.....

dranz3r said...

done that...!!!

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